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I believed their words not long ago
the way they said I had my own glow

I believed the worthless lie
now foremed into a rope to hang me high

I walked into a trap just for me
with no way to set me free

they've kicked the stool from under me
the end of me now for all to see

now they've watched me fall
thinking they know it all

hanging as my life flutters from me
it's then that they finally see

I tried my best and lost it all
instead if flying I hit the brick wall

so in the end I'll take what I've lost
continue on whatever the cost

this rope can no longer hold me
it'll break and set me free

I'll grow my wings and take to the sky
my any odds I can defy

I'll make my road ahead
with every word that they've said

so in the end when I pass them all
it wont be me who takes the fall
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
Nice poem. :) Unrelated to this one in specific, but just what I've been thinking as I read your poetry... Have you tried other styles? Such as a free verse form of not rhyming (my poetry as example) or maybe poetry that holds a rhyme for a longer period of time? (I suggest reading some poetry from the gallery of :iconsapphira-adi:). I suggest more so the latter, it helps to keep the mind focused better on one idea from the poem at a time. :)
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
okay :) I'll check it
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
real friends hold each other up.  all of us are those people.
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
In this poem I'm speaking about the DA jerks that hate me ^^
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
oh... well, ignore the haters.
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
I wrote it because of that and I think it's very inspirational.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
it is, i agree.
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
thank you.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
:)
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YugiFanatic69 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student General Artist
The fall is not ours to take anymore. It's for others who think they're better, who judge and misjudge and bring others down with them. But we'll keep each other up, eh? :D I've got your back bro. :glomp:
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